The Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6GR9ThRXmqM \
Feedback from the last pitch:
The greatest feedback I received from my last pitch was the use of my enthusiastic tone and the use of painting a mental image of exactly what my product would do and how it would fulfill the unmet needs. I feel the feedback that was not so useful for myself was trying to explain how my service is similar to matching Redbox. My service is basically the same idea but it is my own company and has many differentiations to that of Redbox.
What I changed:
I decided to try and be even more enthusiastic and use more visuals in giving my pitch. An attention grabber is key for success. I also decided to try and more slowly talk about the aspects of my business and how this business can be used to target the unmet needs of many people who would find use of my business.
Hi Daniel, I think you did a great job improving from your first elevator pitch and I think that you became a lot more enthusiastic about your offering. It is so crucial because if you're not excited about the offering, then no one else will be ether! Great job putting this together.
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